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DXJ .:Contest Entry:. by ~DandyGrrl:iconDandyGrrl:



Narrator/Julie: Well readers, here you are. Reading my wonderful, awesome, greatly made, super, majorly favorite, perfect, smart, funny, humorous, excellent, famous, um, superultramegaunpredictablelyawesomenessfantasticfabulous Stor- (the ghost gets hit on the head by a not-so-young human/demon girl)

Bionya: Thank goodness we don't have to hear her. Oh yes! Hello readers, knowing Julie, she would rant on about her "good" her story is. Well in fact; this story is about us Afterworlders, (points to Julie) this ghostworlder, and you Worldly Worlders. This story is about romance and hilarity... blah blah blah blah blah~

Narrator/Julie: Mistress, mustn't you begin the story I made?

Bionya: Fine. It all begins in the Afterworld. The world where those who cannot pass to the Underworld, or Upperworld are sent.

Now the Afterworld was a quiet place, no holidays, not so many battles, and it is ruled by me. Holidays are always important to other worlds, but the afterworlders voted for no holidays, such included Valentine's Day, Christmas, and possibly yours and mine, Halloween.
How did I come to like such a holiday? Well I have Jackie to thank for it. Jackie or Jack O' Lantern created most of Halloween, the tricks are very important! Enough that he must leave to the World for strict business! So I must stay at home again… hmmm, did I forget to mention that Mr. Demongo is coming along with Jack? Mr.Demongo is Jackie's most loyal friend; he wouldn't do anything to harm him. Unless he has to.  As I was saying before, Afterworlders couldn't celebrate holidays due to the vote. In fact we Afterworlders never knew what holidays were! Until this idiot (points at Julie again) told us about holidays and how "sweet" they are.
Narrator/Julie: Precisely mistress, holidays are might I say awesome! Especially Halloween. In fact I think you are going a bit of topic.
Bionya: (blushes) well excuse me, um, yes!
Going on about the story, I waved goodbye to Jackie and Mr.Demongo as they went through the land of the Afterworld. Bye Jackie! Bye Mr.Demongo! I cried as they went toward the slob (points at Julie again, who still seems to be hypnotized).
*The story than flashbacks back to the day of Halloween morning*
Julie: (in a hurriedly pace) Will you guys please hurry up! I could get banned from the Ghostworld again!
Demongo: You act as if it never happened to you, in fact it you were banned 23,154, 63 8,290,700,482,214,570 times, am I correct?
Julie: (sarcastically) Yuuus, now hurry!
Jack: You never acted like this when you got banned the other 23, 154, 63 8,290,700,482,214,570 times. (Jack then smirks seeing the ghost's face getting paler every second)
Julie: (sarcastically again) Ha, ha, ha. Very Funny. But seriously! Let's get a move on!
Bionya: Come back safe now! (She yells at the final minute)
Jack: 'Kay.
Demongo: Of course we will. (He smiles at her)
Julie:  Whatever.
*They soon disappear in a flash and the little demon girl runs back inside the old mansion seemingly up to something*
Bionya: Something is going to happen! I can feel it! (she pushes the stone on her bracelet and she sees a portal viewing the three traveling at a slow manner, it seems the ghost wasn't paying much attention to the passengers)
Bionya: (glumly) especially with her nearby.
*Inside the vortex where the three are somehow standing in*
Demongo: (whispering to Jack) what is taking this impudent idiot so long!
Jack: I don't know but if there was something in her brain it must've flew into her empty head.
*Now Julie was smart in many things but her skills at ghostly activities are just horrible, in fact this what she was thinking about. The Ghost world*
Julie: (Inside mind) WHY! Why can't I go haunting with the other ghosts!?
*Flashbacks to the Ghostworld before Halloween day*
Boss: Darling you are just so bad at Ghost stuff! They won't allow the likes of you to do so.
Julie: But I saw them let birds haunt! BIRDS!
Boss: I guess birds are better than you are. (The things you are about to hear is true to the speaker) Anyways it's much more fun to clean the entire Ghostworld right? (She points out the window showing the dusty and dirty mess caused by the town ghosts)
Julie: (closes her gaping mouth) is there something wrong with your head?
Boss: (smiles, not trying to kill her intern) Dearie I get to haunt.
*Goes back to Vortex*
Julie: (still in mind) Oh yeau, I didn't know how to. (She then feels a poke going through her shoulder)
Jack: Hello (that's knocking on her head) anybody in there?
Julie: Eh! Careful now, even a knock makes my master collar rea- ( Her eyes become hazier than usual, she seems to be hypnotized)
Demongo: (with glee) Oh look Jack! Let's throw her away!
Jack: As much as I want to do that we have to get to the World.
Demongo: (with glum) Awww, she doesn't seem as important before.
Jack: But now she's my servant. (Clears throat) Julie take us to the World, and Hurry!
Julie: Yes Master. (The vortex around them seems to gain speed, soon they find themselves in the World again)
*Julie seems to get foggier due to her not allowed in the World she says:*
Julie: Master due to Ghostworld regulations I must return.
Jack: (seeming to copy her from before) Eh, whatever.
*We flash over to The Ghostworld, which is emptier than Billy's head*
Julie: Meyikes! (Looks at the ground which is covered with more dust and dirt, in fact there were some dust bunnies roaming by) How am I ever going to finish cleaning this? ... (Looks at the audience) Okay, I know I have a vacuum, geez…us.
*She pulls out a giant vacuum cleaner and turns the switch on it seems to be battery charged*
Julie: (after 3 seconds) Whew! Finally done! (Turns to see that there is nothing left to clean, but sees some presidentary posters hanging about) Hmm…should I? No! (Talking to herself) There would be trouble…but I'm already in trouble sOoo-
*It seems after that she was still able to cause so much damage. Instead of messing with some useless posters, turns out that she destroyed many buildings*
Julie: (stops, and looks at the mess, then the audience) I have to clean that don't I?
*We now flash back to the world, Jack and Demongo had been playing many pranks on the people of Endsville)
Demongo: Oh Jack! I never encountered this wonderful feeling before! What is it?
*SpongeBob pops out of nowhere and starts to sing*
SpongeBob: F is for friends who do stuff together, U is for you and me, N is for anywhere, and anytime at all here in the deep blue sea. (He then runs away)
Jack:  That was really disturbing.
*Still in the world we flash back to Mandy who is now 11 ½, and Billy who was 12. Unfortunately grim is still there friend slave*
Billy: Look Mandy! I'm a ghost! And I'm Scary! (He is covered in a sheet without eyeholes)
Mandy: Can you see with that thing?
Billy: Hmmmm, uh, No.
Grim: Aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating?
Mandy: In case you haven't noticed the world was in chaos and destruction 2 years ago.
Grim: Like anything like that would happen again.
Billy: Like that? (Points to Jack and Demongo)
Grim: How did he come back! (Grim was in utter shock, Mandy, not so much)
Mandy: Billy, keep your eyes peeled…Billy?
*Billy runs over to Jack and Demongo, because of his stupidity he forgot all about what Jack has done 2 years ago*
Billy: Hey Jack! (Looks at Demongo) Hey you with a head on fire! Are trick or treating?
Demongo: (facing Jack) wasn't he one of the children that thrown you into the Underworld?
Jack: Yes! (Faces Billy) Hey twerp!
Billy: Yes Jack?
Jack: I got you a present and it's in this here sack (he opens the sack widely)
Billy: Yay! (He looks inside the bag only to find himself captured by Jack)
Jack: Ha Ha!  That bag of bones would do anything to get this idiot back!
*Demongo, seemingly knowing what to do, grabs Jack and teleports them to Jack's old house*
Mandy: Where did that idiot went?
Grim: And more importantly where did that prankster and that fire headed person went? (He then sees Billy's costume lying on the ground; he picks it up and shows it to Mandy) Mandy! Look!
Mandy: (She looks at the hole less costume and an angrier-than-usual face appeared) we have to find him. NOW!
Grim: (Surprised) do not rush me girl, let me find my scythe. (Out of his hands his scythe appeared out of nowhere, but this wasn't as exciting as most might think it is)
Mandy: Grim! You have your scythe, now let's find Billy! (A look of worry streaked through her face)
Grim: Ah, okay.
*We return back to Julie who feels forgotten*
Julie: Geez…us! It's a good thing I cleaned up this mess! (Turns around in a bored position) Meh, I hate this place. Time to do some illegal haunting. KE KE KE!
*She vanishes in the thin air. We appear now in Jack's old home*
Billy: (still inside the bag) Hey! I don't see anything in here except a bunch of stupid dust bunnies!
Jack: You fell into another of my tricks! I'll use you to lure that reaper here!
Demongo: Why don't we threatened to kill him, it's been a long time since I've enjoyed the killing of others.
Jack: We can't do that now Demongo! We can do that if Grim doesn't cooperate.
Demongo: How delightful! I'll never forget this night (he gives Jack a small kiss on the pumpkin)
Jack: (startled, he whispers back to the Demon) Not now, Demongo.
*We move over to Mandy and Grim, both are now in panic*
Grim: (running in search of Billy) this is going to be big trouble!
Mandy: (running beside Grim) I know, the show just went on and Billy's gone! (Without her knowing she feels as if she went through something) What the-
Julie: (disappointingly) you just couldn't say excuse me, can you?
Mandy: (faces Julie) Do you know where Billy is?
Julie: (confused) Billy? Not really, shouldn't you be looking for him? The show will die without him.
Mandy: (gets angry due to the carelessness of Julie) that's what we are doing! Why don't do something? All I ever see you do is going on your computers all day long!
Julie: Well! If that's how you see me, fine! (Faces audience) I'm going to the real world! (she vanishes in a rude manner)
Mandy: (getting angrier by the moment) let's go Grim, Billy is more important than her.
Grim: You said it!  
*In the Afterworld, Bionya is still watching over Jack and Demongo, wishing for their safety*
Bionya: I hope Jackie knows what he's doing. (She seems as worried as Mandy was) Mr.Demongo should be careful too.
*Back to Jack and Demongo*
Billy: (still in the bag) let me go! Mandy will find me soon!
Jack: Do you know how horribly she treats you? Do you ever realize how many times she hurt you? And yet you trust her enough that you think she would rescue you?
Billy: (unsure, but gains confidence once more) Mandy will save me! Grim will too! They are my best friends!
Jack: (laughs evilly) you really think that she and that reaper will save you? They were only your friends because they had to!
Billy: (sadly) But, me and Mandy…Grim…friends… (His voice trails off)
Demongo: Oh Jack, your ways of mental torture greatly overpowers that boy's mind. You are so great!
Jack: Demongo. I know what you are trying to do.
Demongo: What? I'm not going to attack. (He smiles slyly) Anyways it's not going to hurt.    
Jack: (blushes, but still sighs) Demongo I know we haven't been together for awhile because it's Halloween.
Demongo: (Understanding where this is going) Yes, I think that is agreeable.
Jack: And I know that because it is Halloween you and Bionya have been together a bit more. (He says, trying to not say anything stupid)
Demongo: That seems fair.
Jack: Well what I'm trying to say is- (Demongo cuts through his sentence)
Demongo: Apology accepted. (He smiles and then pounces on Jack)
Billy: (feels very uncomfortable) eh, never mind….
*Grim and Mandy approaches Jack's house*
Mandy: He has to be here. We looked everywhere!
Grim: Well, lets go!
*Bionya from the Afterworld*
Bionya: I knew something bad was going to happen!(she jumps through the portal, while doing that she transforms into her demon form)
*Back to the World*
Bionya: Stop your steps fools!
Grim: (surprised from the suddency) Bionya! You've returned!
Mandy: (turns to Grim) who is she?
Bionya: Impudent mortal. You serve no purpose here. (The souls from the stone starts to go through her body, she takes aim at Mandy, she shoots.)
Grim: Mandy! (He runs through the blast and manages to save her, unfortunately he fell into pieces)
*from inside*
Demongo: What was that? (He steps up and looks out the window and sees Bionya, Grim, and Mandy)
Jack: How did Bionya get here?
Demongo: (Uncertain he grabs Jack's shoulder) Jack you must know, Bionya has the power to-
*Another Blast fills the air but this time from the scythe that Mandy was holding*
Bionya: (falls to the ground) you think that would stop me? I won't let you destroy Jackie and Mr. Demongo! Even if it takes my life!
Mandy: That's exactly how I feel. No one hurts my best friends and gets away with it! (She prepares for another blast)
Both Grim and Billy: She does care about us!
Demongo: (seems to forget about what he was saying) they both hold so much spirit for their loved ones. But one must go down. I'm going out there.
Jack: Demongo! Please don't do it! That little runt knows how to use a scythe! She might kill you!
Demongo: But she'll kill Bionya! Bionya only suffered pain from knowing she was a Demon. She should be proud. (He then says to Jack) This is her last chance to prove herself.
Jack: …Well what are we waiting for?
Demongo: I knew you would understand. (He grabs Jack just as before and they both appear outside)
Bionya: (turns around) Mr.Demongo? Jackie?
Mandy: You think this will stop me? Well think again. (She shoots again)
Bionya: (she sees the shot facing Jack) Oh no you don't! (She speeds over to the blast and takes it, blood seeps out of her body)
Demongo: Little Girl prepare yourself! (He grabs a skull from his body, throws it, and zaps it. Appeared was a blood thirsty monster whose name was not confirmed)
Mandy: Easy. (She charges at the monster, jumps and stabs the monster. But she didn't caused enough damage. The monster grabs her body) Let me go!
Bionya: (staggers up) Mr.Demongo, Jackie, get back to the Underworld. You can't get hurt. I won't let you. (She falls to the ground)
Jack: Bionya, don't worry I've messed with this girl before; she's not even scary, or funny.
*Grim, during the fight sneaked past everyone. His body was in order and he managed to free Billy*
Billy: (Happily) I knew you would come!
Grim: Good. But Mandy's in trouble.
Billy: Let's hurry then!
Grim: (in his mind) Billy and Mandy seems to be growing up now.
*outside*
Mandy: (faces Bionya) I told you it was easy. Nobody can defeat me.
Bionya: Jackie, Mr. Demongo…save…yourselves
Demongo: Bionya I can't!
*Unfortunately Bionya has already teleported them away back to the Afterworld*
Bionya: (enraged) I WILL NEVER LET YOU HARM THEM!
Mandy: (full of confidence) Hph, I can defeat you in my sleep.
Bionya: Let's see you try.
*They start to battle again, but Bionya seems to gain more power than before. Just when Bionya was about to make her final blast Grim, and Billy pulls her to the ground. Mandy then pins her to the ground with her headband*
Bionya: Let me go you imbassels!
Grim: (Talking to his friends) what do we do with her?
Mandy: Let's destroy her. Here and Now.
Billy: Wait! This was supposed to be a story about Demongo and Jack! We've been taking so much time when this is supposed to be their story! Let's stop this madness once and for all! (he grabs Grim) Hurry Grim! This place looks bad enough! Return her to her world!
*Grim gets worried, while fiddling with his scythe Julie comes back*
Julie: This story is getting off topic. (Grabs Bionya) See you later guys. (and she disappears leaving everyone a bit confused now)
*Back in the Afterworld*
Demongo: Bionya are you well? You know it's never appropriate to send a person away.
Bionya: I'm sorry Mr.Demongo, but I really did care about you guys.
Julie: (acting as her usual self) Looking at her watch, oh man. This story dun really has any romances. Dammit!
Jack: Well now that you mentioned it I… (He looks at the confused Bionya)
Demongo: Who knew it was that long a time! Time for rest! (He winks at Jack)
Bionya: (acting as her usual self as well) I'm tired too, honestly I could say this is the best Halloween ever!
Julie: Yes, yes! Now let's get some sleep! (She speeds up her movements and pushes Bionya into her room. Julie then locks herself in her room. Leaving jack and Demongo in the living room by themselves)
Demongo: It's a relief those two are out of the way. (He places his hand upon Jack's)
Jack: (blushing) yes, it is. (They both pause by the silence of the room, Jack than places his head upon Demongo's shoulder)
Demongo: (Blushes just like Jack is) Wouldn't I be the one who is doing that?
Jack: Does it really Matter? (He then gets closer to the demon)
Demongo: If it makes you happy. (He then feels a warm substance inside his chest)Jack?
Jack: Yes?
Demongo: (Gets closer to Jack) what is this feeling?
*upstairs*
Julie: It's Love.
*downstairs*
Jack: (pauses from hearing her voice answering the question) … Ready to kill her?
Demongo: I don't mind do you?
Julie: (facing audience) I'm in trouble, aren't I?
©2009-2010 ~DandyGrrl
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Author's Comments

This story is about adventure and excitement! Love and sadness! and Many more.

This contest Entry is for :icondemonpumpkindevotion:.
I just hope I'm not too late! Wish me luck!

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LOVE, COMEDY, ACTION! i totally enjoyed this fan-fic! :drool:

i'm so unbelievably HAPPY you were able to ENTER! :+favlove:

i LOL'd so hard at SPONGEBOB! the FUN song! oh, wow! :sing:

the dialogue was INCREDIBLE! i could totally imagine it! :reading:

*swoons* the ending was totally EPIC and LOVELY! :heart:

WONDERFUL WORK, MY DEAR! GOOD LUCK TO YOU! :blowkiss:


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Time passed, and so did the story of Jack O'Lantern.
It is said he still lives in that old house, untouched by time--
Trapped by an ever-changing world that does not understand him...
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Thanks for the awesome comment! :iconimhappyplz:

*Forgive me for the cheesy reply, but really, thanks! XD*

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"That's because of puberty!"

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